Hi there! I've no idea who the crossover folks are, but I liked Sandy anyhow. He came across as a good man, and he made a wonderful foil to a cocky teenaged Dean. LOL, I could so see Dean playing up just like that, and Sandy's reactions were wonderfully measured and mature, in contrast. I also loved your Sammy, the little guy quick and clever even at such a young age, too smooth and well trained to give anything away. Though it's heart-rending to imagine those two kids having to make their escape alone like that, and God knows when or how John caught up with them. Plus your atmosphere around that seedy motel was just a little too real - reminded me of some places up on 4th street in Reno - yuk!
A very original and well-though outsider POV, and I enjoyed it even without knowing the crossover.
If you don't mind, I did spot a couple type-os:
The wink and the gun that capped that statement were the last straw. ~ I'm sure you meant wink and grin.
“Did the tell you where they were going?” ~ Did they tell you where they were going...
But that's just putting the polish on a gem. ;-) Thanks for sharing well-told tale. Cheers ~
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Date: 2007-07-01 08:14 pm (UTC)A very original and well-though outsider POV, and I enjoyed it even without knowing the crossover.
If you don't mind, I did spot a couple type-os:
The wink and the gun that capped that statement were the last straw.
~ I'm sure you meant wink and grin.
“Did the tell you where they were going?”
~ Did they tell you where they were going...
But that's just putting the polish on a gem. ;-) Thanks for sharing well-told tale.
Cheers ~
Erin